Comments of chapter undefined of Supremacy Games

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"The rules of the game are simple, score most points and you win the game. If a team had less than 5 players total, the game would automatically end in favor of the opposite team. If a team felt that it was hopeless to win the game, you have the right to forward your surrender to me. I will judge if it's eligible to accept it or not." This is an excerpt from a chapter I’m currently on. Since this is something that is being said by someone, it has to be in a proper tense. For example , had - has, would - will, felt - feels, was - is(in relation to the above sentences). I hope you will improve Author! I have no problem with the occasional grammatical mistakes though since it happens to everyone. Story wise it’s already top-notch!

Author, I am currently on chapter 400, just commenting here because I want to ask if you ever got a proofreader? Sure, I am enjoying the novel and I can excuse the grammar mistakes here and there, but what irks me the most is that it’s been 400 chapters but you keep using past tense in every conversation when it should be present or present-future tense. For example, using ‘was or couldn’t’ where ‘is or can’t’ should be used. I’m just saying because at this point it seems less like an occasional mistake but a genuine thing that needs to be learnt. Love the novel by the way, just wanted to give feedback.

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