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Comments of chapter undefined of Supremacy Games

zouave
zouaveLv11zouave

The logic regarding power being fueled by bloodliners seems fine but cause and effect seems to be not so solid The original ability dying out cause of lack of source is understandable but suppose a fire ability burns a tree, the fire that is fueled by a user disappearing is fine but what about the fire being fueled by burning of wood itself. I am thinking in terms of the ability being a catalyst in this case at least. Anyway good story, keep up the great work!

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Kayn_
Kayn_Lv15Kayn_

thanks for the chapter and good luck! I hope you can make your dream a success!

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LemarMarley
LemarMarleyLv15LemarMarley

congrats mate on going full time as a writer

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LegolasGreenleaf
LegolasGreenleafLv15LegolasGreenleaf

What I understand of abilities that are getting confused on some. Example: Fire created by a splash effect of a fireball isn’t normal fire but still relies on elemental energy thus disappearing when the ability ends or the user stops supplying it depending on how it works. It is getting confused that a fireball can create normal fire that doesn’t rely on elemental energy to sustain itself. It was saying if that happened ability users would be more dangerous since even low leveled ones could cause massive destruction relying on that. This way elements like fire don’t get advantages that are a little op since it would mean the users don’t have to use as much energy as the rest. Author explains it well in some paragraph comments.

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Grimdarkian
GrimdarkianLv11Grimdarkian

you have alot of guts to put all your hopes into novels, i can respect that and i hope this novel works out for you.

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Emsinity
EmsinityLv14Emsinity

Yow author. I support your decision. Keep up the good work. Ill be rooting for you.

Irishdamned
IrishdamnedLv14Irishdamned

I thank you for the chapter.

No_Good_Tsuna
No_Good_TsunaLv6No_Good_Tsuna

Numbers beats strength most of the time. Plus they at origin

Emsinity
EmsinityLv14Emsinity

See this! I just gifted the story: Lollipop