fallingstar
People complaining about a free story is kinda dumb. It’s FREE so they lose nothing by reading it and if they don’t like it they can just go read something else, it’s not their story they’re just along for the ride. End of the day, we should all just enjoy ourselves and be happy we can have access to such good and entertaining stories such as this one
There are idiots everywhere and the commentsection isn't and exception for that. The anonymity of the internet makes trolls and haters courageous. They get their jollies from putting down people with more talent and motivation than they ever had or will have. The least you should be able to expect is a bit of respect and common courtesy for delivering a free piece of fiction. Sadly, that's not always the case, so I hope, our encouragement will be enough to counteract the drain of motivation from those parasites. Cheers and have fun writing, you are pretty good at it and I would be pretty down if you stopped.
Why is mc going for 1:1 int and wis? I can't really get a good reason for it, int is like 3 or 4 times better than wis but he will still need wis, I would do 3 int every 1 wis while he works out in time id for his body, his skills will lvl easily but he needs to go through his body training as soon as possible since that's his only weakness right now, he should be literally unkillable if he is smart about it He can just port away from literally anything unless he gets oneshot which he won't be after training his body and some good passives
Just a small bit of constructive criticism, On areas like "Uh-oh, you said, "it's okay," that just makes me even more nervous," could it be changed to have the inside area marked by ' rather than " so its more clear that it's within the previously marked area? It'd be like this "Uh-oh, you said 'its's okay,' that just makes me even more nervous,"
Dude just open both of your ears and let the train of complaints pass through both of them out of your head. Keep writing in the way you please because it's your story to begin with. Don't bother yourself with other people's complaints cause this will lead to more of them. Thanks for the chapter, btw.