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Comments of chapter undefined of Monster Cultivation Supply Shop

DaoistTaiChi
DaoistTaiChiLv4DaoistTaiChi

grammar is **** no offense but thats the truth

japprentice
japprenticeLv5japprentice

I would disagree. grammar is far better than many writers found on this app. it's readable. there could be mistakes but just calling it **** is not correct.

xxAsura:Thanks for the feedback, I'll see how I can improve.
Wallker
WallkerLv4Wallker

I can't tell you how many times I've read a story where they say the person is from earth for no reason... You can just cut that part out and make your story... And don't get me started on systems, everyone and their mother is doing a system story, no more original authors anymore.

XiaoYinhe
XiaoYinheLv15XiaoYinhe

This one is similar to Astral Pet Store the start is well explained I'm looking forward for this novel !

ShibaTatsuya786
ShibaTatsuya786Lv11ShibaTatsuya786

I think when the character literally transmigrates into a character with no relatives is a much better story for system shop novels

grimmhorizon
grimmhorizonLv14grimmhorizon

I was thinking it was in a cultivation world not a world similar to ours with cultivation . if I wanted to read solo leveling I'd read it not some cheap knock off between it and the pet store

Jeferson_Moncao
Jeferson_MoncaoLv10Jeferson_Moncao

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Shori
ShoriLv11Shori

Até agora o começo e bem clichê mas vamo ver no que vai dar

Lackofsense
LackofsenseLv4Lackofsense

Thanks for the chapter it was great and I love the idea!

SaintBookwormLich
SaintBookwormLichLv14SaintBookwormLich

Well, it's a promising first chapter.

Flaiver
FlaiverLv4Flaiver

Thanks for the chapter

newthings
newthingsLv6newthings

like this there was another fan fic of Pocket Hunting Dimension novel, but it was dropped i think, dont know whatll happen to this one

tezz
tezzLv4tezz

Nice! I always wanted more novels like this! I hope you don't drop this, bro!

SolarXWings
SolarXWingsLv4SolarXWings

This novel kinda feels like Astral Pet Store. What I didn't like about that novel was him giving up the pet he trained so hard for. Keep it up!

AkiraFang
AkiraFangLv15AkiraFang

Good start. I hope you focus more on the shop and pet cultuvation than romance. Since its the name of the novel.

Bhadresh
BhadreshLv13Bhadresh

Exp

PridefulRoyalty
PridefulRoyaltyLv12PridefulRoyalty

Hmmm, I need to read more. I wonder if this is harem? Or romance? I hope he only have one girl if romance.

Lonnie_Barrar
Lonnie_BarrarLv12Lonnie_Barrar

cool more plz