I would disagree. grammar is far better than many writers found on this app. it's readable. there could be mistakes but just calling it **** is not correct.
xxAsura:Thanks for the feedback, I'll see how I can improve.
I can't tell you how many times I've read a story where they say the person is from earth for no reason... You can just cut that part out and make your story... And don't get me started on systems, everyone and their mother is doing a system story, no more original authors anymore.
I was thinking it was in a cultivation world not a world similar to ours with cultivation . if I wanted to read solo leveling I'd read it not some cheap knock off between it and the pet store