Comments of chapter undefined of Level Up Legacy

Thats last bit felt a little.. odd? out of place? idk, kinda broke my immersion a bit. thanks for the chapter regardless.

i give up. atleast for now, that is. i just cant imagine anything while reading this. you know that when reading novels/fanfic we need to imagine what were reading right? but here, ever since the first chapter. i couldnt imagine sht here, so yeah i give up. maybe when it gets famous ill read it again.

Please dont tell his main weapon will be sword. Do something more unique

I always visual when I read and I don't see a problem with this story. no over detailing which is boring.

thanks for the chapter

😀 👍 👍 Thanks for the Work

Thanks for the chapter

need to improve grammar. I love the story.

Let's see if I got this right so far. He's going to go in for a test but decided to go into an VR arcade to kill time, beat some dude with his ability and is now being scouted. Really makes me wonder where this will lead.

Good!

this is getting boring ill give it one more chapter

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ok let me see how this goes on he's average alright buh his IQ is lacking so I want to see show me 🤔

👍 like this book

Short chapter not enough to truly whet the appetite

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Thank you for the chapter.

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