MellowGuy
Jizz-o. Strange name for a scholar lol.
OMG!! It wasn’t a betrayal?!?! I can’t believe just the absense of a cliche is enough to make me happy... Sigh.
author, your transition between scenes is not smooth. U should work on it
Jumping from scene to scene without explanation is jarring and confusing. I have no idea what's going on.
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with alan taking the damage on their behalf.* i think you meant the damage since attack isnt really well placed there.
Imagine trying to save idiots who were fine with watching him die
Is there any missing part on this chapter? It felt like some parts were left out.
Oh, what a disapointment. A “hero” mc.
Thanks for the chapter. Also, the grammar in the novel is amazing. Better than many other novels I've read.
Alan was too stupefied at the turn of events making him stand there blankly.
All these comments about the random frame skip is making me laugh so hard. I dont even know what to say about the skips myself.
😁😁😁
Thanks for the chapter
thanks👍
Chris Hansen: "Why don't you take a seat ?" lol
thanks
thanks for the chapter 💖
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