Alexander_the_grey
also, keep it as Victoria only. It would only cheapen their relationship and make for an extremely unsatisfactory story. honestly, even if this is my favorite HP fanfic, I would drop if you add another girl for him. This is not me threatening to drop, you obviously will do what you think is best, I just lose interest when there are cheap relationships. can't get invested enough.
It’s your story bud, if you feel that just one girl is enough keep it that way. But if you feel that you would have liked Tonks in on it do so. If you go with both girls you can use the argument that it’s in order to keep both houses alive, Victoria is the only heir left for traverse house, and well you get it. Just have it make sense is all. This is your story bud and I’m just here for the ride. I’ll give ya my opinions but, I’ll never tell ya how to write your own story 😁
think a lot are thinking of this as a harem situation and it doesn't have to be. I have read some really nice 2 wife situations that were not like a harem. just a guy married with 2 women that live him and each other. wasnt any play play or anything like that. anyway if he does go that way he can do a good job with it no matter.
A harem is three or more people in a relationship with one person so stop with that comment. Next for the author love your work so far one best SI harry potter fan fics on the site but if you read over the story you can see Mc needs a balance in his life of all work and no play and Tonks hits the mark in that department. She was fun side like in the earlier chapters when she may have been the main girl. However the serious ship you have going with Victoria make it somewhat easy to add her if you do what are already doing with the lords and lay titles