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Comments of chapter undefined of HPRP (New Chapters in fanfic section version)

Mugiwara12
Mugiwara12Lv15Mugiwara12

Yes to sirius n Amelia but leave the young couple alone!

Sebastian_Iliev
Sebastian_IlievLv4Sebastian_Iliev

Nah keep it Only Aedan and Victoria more meaningful that way. And for Sirious and Amelia, sure go for. It will be interesting what your twist on their relationship will be since I have seen a lot fics where they were to be married or in relationship befere he got framed.

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Alexander_the_grey
An_Anime_Addict
An_Anime_AddictLv13An_Anime_Addict

Yes yes yes add Tonks with Victoria and Aedan, i wont mind it if you dont do it but i would also like if you add her. I dont like her being with Remus because he's a coward.

Li_Cangtian
Li_CangtianLv6Li_Cangtian

also, keep it as Victoria only. It would only cheapen their relationship and make for an extremely unsatisfactory story. honestly, even if this is my favorite HP fanfic, I would drop if you add another girl for him. This is not me threatening to drop, you obviously will do what you think is best, I just lose interest when there are cheap relationships. can't get invested enough.

Ghostwolf
GhostwolfLv14Ghostwolf

Tory would never allow a second women according to the personality you set her up as.

Scythe02
Scythe02Lv14Scythe02

no no no dont add tonks istg it takes the whole immersion off when there is a harem cos there was absolutely no mention that a harem is even possible in the H.P world

rahul14
rahul14Lv6rahul14

No harem plz. It will just be weird. Yes to ameila and sirius

Darcksage
DarcksageLv11Darcksage

no harem.

BlackhawkRookie
BlackhawkRookieLv14BlackhawkRookie

I love Aedan and Victoria’s relationship. Think adding other people to it would ruin the dynamic.

T_P_3495
T_P_3495Lv4T_P_3495

No harem pls

Shinzo
ShinzoLv15Shinzo

It’s your story bud, if you feel that just one girl is enough keep it that way. But if you feel that you would have liked Tonks in on it do so. If you go with both girls you can use the argument that it’s in order to keep both houses alive, Victoria is the only heir left for traverse house, and well you get it. Just have it make sense is all. This is your story bud and I’m just here for the ride. I’ll give ya my opinions but, I’ll never tell ya how to write your own story 😁

StormHermit
StormHermitLv5StormHermit

Yes please for both your questions author.. Amelia and Sirius could seriously use some help and rest.. Tonks deserve better than Moony lupin.. Crazy scared waste of a werewolf.. Hmph.. 😂😂

Brezer
BrezerLv14Brezer

think a lot are thinking of this as a harem situation and it doesn't have to be. I have read some really nice 2 wife situations that were not like a harem. just a guy married with 2 women that live him and each other. wasnt any play play or anything like that. anyway if he does go that way he can do a good job with it no matter.

liljd992
liljd992Lv2liljd992

A harem is three or more people in a relationship with one person so stop with that comment. Next for the author love your work so far one best SI harry potter fan fics on the site but if you read over the story you can see Mc needs a balance in his life of all work and no play and Tonks hits the mark in that department. She was fun side like in the earlier chapters when she may have been the main girl. However the serious ship you have going with Victoria make it somewhat easy to add her if you do what are already doing with the lords and lay titles

Acsmaster007
Acsmaster007Lv4Acsmaster007

Add tonks in ....as well..... threesome...hehe ....Remus is a scumbag

Samuel_Neary
Samuel_NearyLv3Samuel_Neary

I’ll continue to enjoy reading either way if you add Tonks to the relationship or not, but I do believe it’ll need some more build-up. I think Tonks and Victoria would need to develop a better relationship, something like sisters if you were to decide to go this route.

Daoist_Mandyana
Daoist_MandyanaLv5Daoist_Mandyana

yes to both relationships please

Chronos32
Chronos32Lv13Chronos32

Yes to both author yes to both 😁😁😁

ForgetfulAtheist
ForgetfulAtheistLv12ForgetfulAtheist

Nonono keep things like this, no threesome bull****, if you really must do a kinky chapter where Victoria drag tonks in the bed to surprise aedan, but no long term relationship with her.

Zibarn
ZibarnLv14Zibarn

"Yes" for Amelia + Sirius "Maybe" for Tonks + Aden + Victoria (but only if you make it fit like Aden developing something like a split personality (like the Hulk so that for example Smart/ Phoenix Aden with Victoria and Wild/ Cat Aden with Tonks)