Comments of chapter undefined of Seeking the Dao in the Seemingly Mundane Mortal World

Is it me or does this chapter seem like its fragmented since it doesnt really flow well 🤔

this is like mashed potatoes, but potatoes are delicious thia is not

AV😉Man Of Culture

More people should be reading this one, carry on folks and you'll see a amazing story!

re-reading. it all makes sense now. just roll with it ppl.

Hard to follow. Dense Prose, skittering viewpoint.

I laugh in the face of a danger

Why do I have the feeling like this opening chapter is written like a screenplay for some movie? 'Cause it's a bit fragmented. The overall writing and tone was appealing though

Cool

nice

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