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Comments of chapter undefined of Game of Thrones: The Prideful One.

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Game of Thrones: The Prideful One.

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TheMaddestMan
TheMaddestManLv11TheMaddestMan

Jesus Christ why are you rushing the plot so fast. You could devote at least a whole chapter to each of these massive revelations you brought up. Instead you decided to make the taming of twelve Krakens a single sentence. I know he can tame animals but you've gotta restrict and create some rules around it. On top of that actually tell the story of how he found Krakens, maybe even name a few.

2yr
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ZiaZombie
ZiaZombieLv11ZiaZombie

Vodka, bears and gold; how much more Russian can you get.

3yr
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JesusFreakk
JesusFreakkLv4JesusFreakk

You're going way too fast there lad, easy up a bit... No need to rush the plot and sh1t... Go slowly

3yr
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venomwave
venomwaveLv12venomwave

super soldier serum also enhance the mind

3yr
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EvilWolf
EvilWolfLv11EvilWolf

I'm not even gonna be able to remember that coin system lol

3yr
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Gundar_Varr
Gundar_VarrLv1Gundar_Varr

OK I DROPPED IT NOW... Wtf with this author, how old are u? U make it like i read a wikipedia or something. TOO FAST

3yr
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The_Oldest_King
The_Oldest_KingLv3The_Oldest_King

One year later One year later One year later F U C K bye

3yr
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Genist
GenistLv4Genist

All you need to do to prevent 'corporate espionage' up to a point is compartmentalize. Divide the alcohol making process up into different steps and make sure no worker has access/knowledge of all the steps.

3yr
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OldPhilosopher
OldPhilosopherLv5OldPhilosopher

Dont rush the plot dude...and please fix the grammar

3yr
5
Issac_Keen
Issac_KeenLv13Issac_Keen

I like it although more detail could be added there's no rush đŸ™đŸ» awesome story

3yr
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SpiraSpira
SpiraSpiraLv14SpiraSpira

MC: do you even slav, bro?

3yr
4
Harem_fan
Harem_fanLv5Harem_fan

Krakens, very very clever!

3yr
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Zealtome
ZealtomeLv6Zealtome

if u have kraken, why bother taking loan

2yr
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NerdPeter
NerdPeterLv13NerdPeter

I think you got timeline wrong Lyanna Mormont was born in 292 AC. How can she talk and wield a stick at age of 1? Of course that’s an innocent mistake.

3yr
2
Adolstein
AdolsteinLv13Adolstein

With kraken you are technicaly the king of the sea... Nice

3yr
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Zachariah_Browning
Zachariah_BrowningLv4Zachariah_Browning

He should also work on improving the construction and farming techniques. Then the sewage system and start raising bears as mount for his people make every warrior raise one from the time it’s a cub

3yr
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Sculp
SculpLv12Sculp

Thanks for the effort

3yr
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Meruemfreecs
MeruemfreecsLv3Meruemfreecs

thanks and good chapter

3yr
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The_Battle_God
The_Battle_GodLv12The_Battle_God

Great chapter. Looking forward to more chapters.

3yr
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Shoyou_Hinata_1209
Shoyou_Hinata_1209Lv1Shoyou_Hinata_1209

How tf did you find kraken man? I don't remember krakens being in GoT. If there were isn't it like literally having a dragon level force in water lol

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