Comments of chapter undefined of Reborn as Mo Fan from Versatile Mage

Well that's depressing

Damn and here I hoped that when I saw the notice u weren't going to drop it damn well it was good anyway even if u followed the plot

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Aww sh1t, I knew it... With the length of the fanfic and the poop way of following the plot with nearly no change... I honestly would ask you to just read first.. Read all the novel in online website, the authentic canon and those good fanfic... Read and learn from their work.. If you still want to write, learn from them first.. If not, your next fanfic will still the same as this.. A poop.