Comments of chapter undefined of Reborn as Mo Fan from Versatile Mage

jesus... your writing his good no doubt.. but wtf you just time skipped a whole season -_-..... and we have no interactions with any people we have like 3 fight scenes that we seen and they where like 2 sentences ... common dude are you writing chapters or just summary's of the actual cannon chapters with a slightly more op mo fan ...

The pace isnt that much of a problem now, but in future chapters you may run out on stuff to write about? Welp its up to you if the story end up short anyways