The ending was a little confusing. I wasnât sure what happened until I read the authorâs note. You have a unique writing style that I love and I donât wish to change it but maybe emphasize how she wasnât paying attention to how far she backed up? Or some imagery of the pond nearby?
I really like the choice of words and the narration you did here, Rachel! Finally as I have time to rest and read, I chose to read yours and this is getting more interesting as I immerse myself. đĽ°
