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Comments of chapter undefined of FALLING IN LOVE WITH HIM - HER FIRST LOVE

Najad_Sahari
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While waiting for the official plot here's my version (p/s, I often do this for my fav novel which is in the works - call it impatient syndrome ) Version 1 part 1 1. Danny had finally confided to Ace on the difficulty with Jack as Hera will be affected . Ace was naturally furious but laid a plan - "Saving Hera" mission. 2. The flight details which were handed to Christopher were actually a decoy and they actually took a different flight / private jet hence King Christopher 's plan were not fully successful. Gisela didn't get to meet Ace 3. Upon meeting Hera, Alexander and Felicity was very sure she's their Hera but didn't disclose straight away as Alex must find out what actually happened and this is to continue to protect her from King Christopher. Furthermore, they sensed Mike's resentment of Hera hence they both agreed that they had to be mindful. Security around Ace are being tighten hence making Ace suspicious 4. Helena adamant to attend SPALEV but Jonathan made her use another name to protect her identity. However( as we want it to be), her attempt to catch Ace attention failed 5. Ace and gang graduates and made sure Hera's title as Ace's girl is maintained by 'implanting' his 'eyes and ears' are still in school .

Shonihn
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hey, thank you so much for sharing your thoughts. I hope you enjoyed reading my book. by the way, I read your version of the sequel from the beginning to the end. it was fun. you said you do this for all your fvrt novels. so I'm going to assume mine is one of your fvrts then? thank you for investing your time and reading my book. my gratitude.

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Tot_2U
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I hope 🤞 Hera keeps her words…. Please let her change her mind and go to NY with Hunter

Sseung_Mi
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aaaaaaa I need an update !!

Lizzie2609
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Thank you for the update <33

Azra_Shafi
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it's amazing chapter but author please sort the problem Danny and save hera

Najad_Sahari
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Version 1 part 2 6. The disappointed Helena got more curious with Hera after spending that year in same school. Miraculously Alastair and Greta had an unexpected baby boy and the baby had forest green eyes. The royal family rejoice but not Helena as her broken heart made her more bitter and more vicious after seeing Jonathan speaking to Hera at one point. 7. Danny 's and Abby's parents got jittery as Hera's 18th bday approaches as that 's the end of financial support from Jonathan 8. As Ace and gang graduates from University. (Samantha no longer in the picture ), Alexander and Felicity had enough info about Danny 's parents and their source of income - another series of Mafia dealing and intervention in "Saving Hera ". In a split turn of events, Jonathan got hit in an attempt to save Hera but not before telling her who she really is. 9. Sebastian woke up but never fully recovered but enough to erase Mike bitterness on Hera's birth which caused his father's condition. End with Ace and Hera's wedding. Hera maintain her chastity right until wedding night. 10. Sequel on Bianca, Eric, Danny, Mike with cameo Ace and Hera's new family life

Ady_Hansrod
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one more chappy...pretty please...

Ursi1la
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Finally Hunter

Najad_Sahari
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Hi Phantom - it helps to give closure right? So we can move on (so to speak). 😃

Lizzie2609
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Please update <33