Comments of chapter undefined of Reborn in Twilight
Reborn in Twilight
Brainstorming
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You cannot accept criticism and only talk about your logic, showing aggression like a mad dog. You're a bad writer, your fanfiction won't survive 40 chapters like most of the novels on this site.
If I wanted to belittle you, I would write a low-rated review. And what I wrote was in the comments under the chapter, you are just aggressive, that's all.
Brainstorming:I started writing for me. When I ran out of good stories to read, I was like why not make my own. So it’s simple you don’t like what you read fine. Stop reading, but for you to insult me in the process of you dropping that’s not cool. I won’t respond kindly to that. How many books have I dropped since I found this app? More than hundred. Have discouraged any author or insulted in any way while doing so. Of course not, I Know he is a human, I know he has different ideas than me, views the world through his perspective and not mine. So instead of belittling his work before I drop and never come back to it again. I just drop and he will never know. That way he keeps his good Vibe and I don’t spread negativety in the world. You guys hit me with negativety and insults of course what you’ll get back is the same treatement.image
The MC isn't weak ok? No matter how you put it, the MC was just a normal person in his last life and never, I mean never been into fight with a vampire. He managed to injure edward yes, but he was caught off guard back then! The MC isn't that strong "Physically". What would you expect of him? They say anger clouds your judgement, this is what exactly the MC's been going through, he was threatened by using his family so he doesn't have the time to make strategies and stuff and just wanted to face those vampires. But obviously, "vampires" has super speed, and he only has storm's powers and whitebeard's fruit which still hasn't reach even 15% of its power because he's weak physically. And was caught off guard by being strangled to his neck. Good chapter author, update more please.
Great chapter!! An extra chaos but reasonable. Those two vampires are always looking for a way to take their revenge on the volturi. (They even joined the cullens ragtag group to fight the volturi in canon even though their proposal is suicidal. They said yes even though they didn't know the talents of the group could offset the lack of numbers.) It wouldn't be a longshot to hire someone with clairvoyant talents to find a way or person to defeat the volturi. The mc didn't exist in canon, so they didn't find a human they can turn with enough talent to destroy the volturi. Now since their obsession for revenge is clouding their judgement, this situation became reasonable! Even the fact that the cullens were distracting him with questions could be a way to hinder him while someone else (Edythe cause she's fastest) solves the problem since they still have misgivings on letting him face vampires alone. Alice powers also fits because she might have seen that if the mc goes alone to confront them, he'll be left in pain on the ground thereby mistaking the situation as grimmer than it actually was. It also explains her premonitions conditions where she could only use it if someone decides on something.
No no no no noooooo Making him a vampire is gonna be too cliche, every novel about twilight makes their mc a vampire, can't you just not follow the same line. Plssss am begging don't make him a vampire ok, maybe leave him human by some magic or make him a werewolf, even better, make him an hybrid, half wolf half vampire, human hybrid is way too cliche too
