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Is this more edge or cringe?
Why the authors always make their mc who are 3-6 years old act like *****. He just have to tell i dont know and thats all.
great novel but I still hate you for killing the dog :( so sad
Got a 3 year old talking like an adult but ppl say no harem because its not realistic
But I shall preserve
His reason for picking sand devil was so cringe and overly edgy made me nearly throw up
If you are a sand devil stay away from Georgia and a guy named Johnny
Grammar needs some touch ups. So capital letters etc. Will make the story easier to read and flow better.
Nah why you kill the dog
Lets hope his hero name is crocodile.
Thank you for the chapter!
thx for chapter
Tank yu. Espasing off words plis.
Great novel so far
Use ***** SPACE WHY THE HELL ARE YOU WRITING LIKE THIS 3 SPEAK IN 1 LINE
thanks for the chapter! keep up the amazing work
Thanks for the great chapter! đ
Can you read through it once, or run it through Grammarly? misspelled words in every paragraph and bad grammar just killed me.
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Glad I found this đđžitâs good