overloaded_maxima
I have a motto that I never stop reading a story in the first chapter. The reasoning behind that is because nowadays, the first few chapters in most web-novels and fanfics tend to be pretty bad on average. So I promise myself to give anything I read a fair shake. But dear lord. This was garbage. I'm honestly finding hard to stick to my word and keep reading this. Cause if the rest of your story is written like you did this first chapter, I highly doubt I'm gonna make it past the second chapter. Yikes.
This reads like someone wrote a novel in Chinese then fed it through Google Translate and posted what came out.
Honoured_Writer:What was so bad about this chapter?
Got a laugh out of the ending of that call. And that is not an argument I personally enjoy having because I love animation in general. Who gives a **** what country it comes from? Also, I admittedly haven't watch/read enough Isekai (yet), but of the ones I have checked out, getting sucked into the TV hasn't happened to start it out yet. I think I had that idea once growing up, but can't remember. Nice first chapter. Also, I'd recently finally watched all of season one of My Hero Academia and enjoyed it. Will likely continue the series. Great start