Comments of chapter undefined of Swallowing The Spider

Yeah this made the mc pathetic so this story isn’t for me anymore

What a Beta B*tch weakling with Spider Powers. Between reality flip-flopping and the week loser MC I'm getting about ready to drop this.

How is it he can transfer from marvel to dc but still get ****ed by black cat?

Yea I agree this is poorly done

My dude you did not just get tied up in rope and not break freak Spider powers but can't break freaking rope the F***??? And what the F*** dude you got trained by shield but can't get out of this situation

Did he just lose to catwomen wtf garbo mc is this

Lost me here your trying to do to much to quick barely knows gwen and yet he tells her about his dimension travels? Gets to dc and gets his ass kicked by catwoman sorry but im done the mc is patetic and to trustworthy.

So he has spider power (strength and sens) but he doesn't incapacitat her? And if he has a "powerful spider-sens" how come it didn't tell him something was off when she come to kiss him?! And finally why when he woke up roped to a bed and she show him the memory stick in her hand, he didn't just brake his restraint and take it back?! All that to say, it feel really forced to me. Because the simple fact of having spider power AND knowing how to use them (wich he did, you write it) is enough to go on a draw in a fight aginste batman (not beat him, his plot armor is far to big). So HOW DID SHE BEAT HIM AND WHY DID HE DO NOTHING?!?!?! BUT except the feeling of forced plot he nice to read.

not sure if im gonna keep reading this story... has potential but mc is just too beta and incompetent for my taste. also, he has fucking spider powers... how the hell can catwoman keep him tied up?? spiderman can lift tons without issues... did catwoman tie him up with chains made of vibranium or something??? but i guess ill give this story another shot, wait a few more chapters to see if mc keeps being a weakling/beta/incompetent moron before deciding

Sorry I'm out. Absolutely not a fan of the MC at all. Hope batman accidentally kills him or something. Good bye.

For real spider power cant handle a whip???

Mc is pathetic now

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This is official a dumb book i mean the ****, how do you lose to catwoman

holy **** , that just sad man

This is so weak! An Mc with Spiderman powers just got beat by a peak human. This was so stupid. Yea I get that she drugged him not beat him but that was all his fault. He fell for that with shield training. With such a beta personality I feel like I will be pissed off by him too much the further I read. So Dropped.

the mc is pathetic what with that.

waste of time, don't read

haysss he was played because he is too naive if he just killed her then problem solve..dont think with your dick man