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Comments of chapter undefined of Fate Ruler Of Death

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Fate Ruler Of Death

Xshamee

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David_Drake
David_DrakeLv4David_Drake

Pokemon fics tend to throw in a romantic interest way to early. Its best that when he goes on his journey its alone and have him do mini arcs with reoccurring characters. Later on once you establish a few character traits and world building, then the waifus can appear like wild magikarps.

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Xshamee
XshameeAuthorXshamee

Will keep it in mind, thanks for the suggestion.

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ahmed_waleed_1200
ahmed_waleed_1200Lv5ahmed_waleed_1200

thanks for the chapter keep writing and hope you post soon new chapters Great work like always so keep up with new chapters and updates and don't drop this story thanks for your hard work and can't wait to read your next chapters

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Ser_Gamma
Ser_GammaLv13Ser_Gamma

Also, Selena is a horrible choice. But whatever. Your story.

3yr
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Ser_Gamma
Ser_GammaLv13Ser_Gamma

Why is he called Demiurge? A Demiurge already exists...SASUGA AINZ-SAMA dude.

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Tsu_Kasa
Tsu_KasaLv1Tsu_Kasa

THANK

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