Comments of chapter undefined of Death... and me

Well, the system is becoming a bit stupid, take care one the biggest problem in system's novels is the system having to much power on the MC. People dont like when the MC it's simply a puppet.

Rean and Roan, the heroes!

the story is failing author making a stupid mistake to just bring a plot

Reward far outweighs the punishment. I dont think its fair

spoiler alert they wont fail the mission... common seriously if you gona give a mission give one that they can afore to lose. If you gave one that would end the novel if they fail then it pretty much mean they wont! so tension wouldn't even be there! there another fanfic does the same thing ... gave out mission that had fatal consequence ... we all know that it aren't gona happen!

Kind of forced direction the flower mission could have passed as the system needing something, but this time? It feels kind of forced if the first group led the beast toward them and a mission came up would have been better, they would have saved some of them protecting their own group

Damnit, I really wanted those arrogant fools to get wiped out. Also I really hope they can do something about this system wontonly giving out death penalties, system slave MCs is usually something that a lot of ppl hate, including me.

Wat do dey expect them to do. The missions are so unreasonable

System admin (Suiyan) is the great demon lord that separated the universes than realising his mistake wrote a novel about how he should amend it. In his boredom he gave this freaking mission to our heroes

It's not like they are going to die alright.We are just going for an adventure.

Was it really that bad? I might rewrite the last part then. '-'

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I do Like A Cold Version Of Sister Orb 😂

It was good

for anyone who has read system stories before this was honestly expected, but definitely not wanted especially because with the harsh penalty there is no other outcome apart from succeeding. for example giving sis orb the power to reduce the penalty would be more interesting and leads to alot more possible outcomes. Sister orb needs the authority she deserves!

On the bright side this Aegis dude will be soo mad whenever they save him

Hundreds of kids have already died in the test and the system decides it's important to save some now? System is a hypocrite

So basically they are suppose to save a future mc that will take the sect places but won't because he will die if these two don't save him?

I don't believe the system... always going on and on about changing hosts. I don't believe it is that easy to change hosts. moreover the missions always mention the death punishment easily........

Are they mad about the difficulty of the mission or about having to save the red aptitude guy?