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Comments of chapter undefined of Death... and me

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AkiraLight
AkiraLightLv14AkiraLight

Thank you for the chapter.. it's dumb how not many haven't noticed this amazing novel yet

damongreed
damongreedLv14damongreed

It’s the title lol

Jadefrog
JadefrogLv5Jadefrog

I was really enjoying this novel, but the author had to lock chapters...dropping.

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myeyeshurt
myeyeshurtLv14myeyeshurt

Unfortunate.... i really liked this but im already using passes for dayly releases and since theres well over 100 locked chapters here it looks like this aint happening.....

Aoalbjorn
AoalbjornLv3Aoalbjorn

another novel dropping for being locked

DRNK_DRGN
DRNK_DRGNLv5DRNK_DRGN

How am i even gonna pay for all these locked chapters. This is why i hate Webnovel

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TRICK101
TRICK101Lv13TRICK101

The end.

Shirayuki_Dono
Shirayuki_DonoLv4Shirayuki_Dono

Fast question. Now that they can put other things inside the orb, that means that they don’t have to enter naked anymore, right?

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mellembakker
mellembakkerLv1mellembakker

It's quite annoying that you can't read further from here.

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Archana_Singh_4723
Archana_Singh_4723Lv2Archana_Singh_4723

That was very good

ErozothDraeor
ErozothDraeorLv6ErozothDraeor

I tried, I really did. The style of writing is great, it reads like a traditional cultivation\adventure novel. Starting weak, slow but steady progress, there dangers but not over the top that came out of nowhere, they are able through effort overcome, they are strong but not world breaking...yet. My opinion is that the more I can relate to the MC the more I will like the novel. Minor plot armor\holes can be ignored if the MC is relatable, likeable, competent and has common sense. He doesn't need to be god gift to the world nor cunning enough to be Satan. Unfortunately I cannot get into the two MCs, other than relating to two different characters with different personalities is very hard, close to impossible, I always feel it's a waste. Most readers...many\some readers, tend to like one MC and barely tolerate the other or even hate it which makes the novel suffer from both sides, seems like a bad move for the novel on the whole. In this case, rather than have one MC I like this two have some aspects I like and at the same time both have more than a few aspects I very much do not like which makes this over all, for me, not a good novel to read since not liking the MC is the worst thing when reading a novel. Good luck. If you ever write a similar novel with only one MC I hope to read it.

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Doggolover
DoggoloverLv2Doggolover

:D

Sheenius
SheeniusLv11Sheenius

Wish we had this book on kindle. 200+ chapters on WN is like 40-50$ and I'm not ready to pay that for a book. Just let me buy this book for the normal bookprice please, take my money 🥺

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Aditi_Chamarthy
Aditi_ChamarthyLv2Aditi_Chamarthy

Great

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manololo79
manololo79Lv15manololo79

I'm loving this novel I just have one small complain so small that it's not worth it to call it a complain but the author is reporting the same info twice and I don't mean in the novel itself but at the end there's the extra chapter deal info twice, but that being said since I haven't caught up yet maybe that has already change so for not the most important thing for me to say is that this is and absolute joy to read

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PeterA
PeterALv5PeterA

getting interesting

VictoryAboveAll
VictoryAboveAllLv15VictoryAboveAll

That little girl is annoying

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Chaoticmike
ChaoticmikeLv14Chaoticmike

Are you going pro with this novel or not?

Jinchusage
JinchusageLv14Jinchusage

Well, this story has been sitting in my library for so long its now im glad i got to it.

Lithoor_Bayushi
Lithoor_BayushiLv4Lithoor_Bayushi

Is it Majorias or Masjoria? The title says the first one, but the second one happens multiple times throughout the chapter.

C_Star_6157
C_Star_6157Lv2C_Star_6157

I really like this story. It takes a new angle at a commonly used idea, reincarnation into a martial world. It is really interesting to get to see the twins grow up! <3