Comments of chapter undefined of Idol Dream

I just believ the chapterr was rushed, I'm enjoying it so far but he still Should check the details of the contract, he was still in his mid twenties and should now how these types of companies behave depending on his previous music career from his past life, from my perspective u should at least make more detailed then rushing the chapter, my guy met the the women for less then 30min and straight away just gave his life away to to company, I know that this is my opnion but just giving parts u can improve on. just try not to rush the important details of the story