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Comments of chapter undefined of Rewrite! DC: True Power of Ancient Saiyan

Blade1450
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I like the story keep it going

PainxSama
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Just continue Were you left off 🤷‍♂️ I’ve enjoyed is so far

P_J_Sch
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Just continue, it was a good Story line so far

Isaac058
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JohnnyK
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Yes And Add Raven

Skarlet_Retro
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I like the story. where was he suppose to go after he woke up and it not like they could have hurt him if they wanted to.

Benoit_Valtin
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if you have regained your enthusiasm for writing, why start a boring rewrite, simply start writing again, most women have already had time to finish your story and writing is of no use to us moving forward, you rewrite afterwards

Atrox_ashborn
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updates??

Atrox_ashborn
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updates??

6BigBoneMeat9
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Honestly I don’t see anything wrong with the way it was going

hol_low
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is he a legendary super Saiyan like broly or a regular super Saiyan with evil elements.

Mythical_observser
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The beginning wasn't as you want but personally the story is good Author.... just continue, u can show the mc and other characters development in the Continuous chapter

BattleKing10000
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How about instead of an Evil Saiyan you just make him a Ancient or Legendary Super Saiyan, Maybe make him more independent earlier on, maybe more straight forward instead of as scheming too. A lot of it was great but, it kind of started going flat around his imprisonment and the after the breakout the brainwashing and possible selling of them afterwards felt like a waste.

Atrox_ashborn
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thnx for the chapter

Conor_Webster
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👍👍👍😀

txy_
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hope to get chapter soon😁.

Daoist223817
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👍👍👍👍👍

DoctorSus
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44 chapters and still CANT clap a single cheek