Comments of chapter undefined of Heaven's Gambit [BL]
Heaven's Gambit [BL]
ThirtyTyrants
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Well the new chapter was great, so Im glad you pushed through! I know it seems niche...but I think because youre western and able to explain these unknown concepts in layman terms, it makes it accessible. Im western, as well, and this is definitely a new genre for me. But it feels still feels comfortable and familiar. Because I know nothing about this genre, as you describe their world its just like discovering the rules and social order etc of any fantasy novel. Figuring out the lay of the land as i read. What youre doing is definitely working. I think youre selling yourself short. I can see how being a writer would be an uphill battle. ...and how disheartening it might be to not be recognized on an this platform when some very poor quality writing and story telling is upstaging you. But youve definitely got talent. Give yourself credit for devising a smart story. You are captivating readers! Wish i could do more to grow your reader base. Not sure how the payment scheme is here. But I imagine its not in the authors favors Anyways! Keep writing. Cant wait to follow along with all your stories
O fu*k he knew were they where the whole time and now he's taken him😮 what on earth is L.T going to do now? they are going to hold him captive which is the only silver lining here right now coz at least they aren't going to kill him and where is Wam Mi what happened to her I hope they didn't kill her 😥 god I'm so worried now. Thanks for the chapter
Your Story is so good! I started reading a few of the stories in the top 10 and yours is SO much better. Its the only one I come to read because its actually a great quality. I hope more readers will show support by voting for you. I feel like you should adapt it for publication. Im an avid reader and think this could easily sit on bookshelves
It's indeed a cruel, merciless truth. The title suits the chapter in many ways. 😭😭😭 From a dream straight to a nightmare... And Shu Ai still has the upper hand, even with all the effort they put to get this weapon 😭😭😭 On another note, thank you so much for your hard word, author! Congratulations for finishing Volume 1! I'm really excited for the beginning of Volume 2 ☺️
