Well the new chapter was great, so Im glad you pushed through! I know it seems niche...but I think because youre western and able to explain these unknown concepts in layman terms, it makes it accessible. Im western, as well, and this is definitely a new genre for me. But it feels still feels comfortable and familiar. Because I know nothing about this genre, as you describe their world its just like discovering the rules and social order etc of any fantasy novel. Figuring out the lay of the land as i read. What youre doing is definitely working. I think youre selling yourself short. I can see how being a writer would be an uphill battle. ...and how disheartening it might be to not be recognized on an this platform when some very poor quality writing and story telling is upstaging you. But youve definitely got talent. Give yourself credit for devising a smart story. You are captivating readers! Wish i could do more to grow your reader base. Not sure how the payment scheme is here. But I imagine its not in the authors favors Anyways! Keep writing. Cant wait to follow along with all your stories

Your Story is so good! I started reading a few of the stories in the top 10 and yours is SO much better. Its the only one I come to read because its actually a great quality. I hope more readers will show support by voting for you. I feel like you should adapt it for publication. Im an avid reader and think this could easily sit on bookshelves

Careful what you wish for😳😳

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Your chapters are ridiculously short You dont even get a piece of plot in before you end the chapter

You are such a great writer I really enjoy your stories and your writing style

will you be continuing to write this story soon??? 🤞🤞🤞🤞

Right?!

Very confusing how he could claim her as mate and then forget her 🤷🏻‍♀️

Why does hIs father thInk hes dead Surely the devil can know these things

Lol Not wrong. And also...if the devil doesnt like luciens brothers, does he mean the other demons at irenes house?

What was the First one You Read?

Why is haZel gone but All other memorIes in tact?

I was worried the book was going to end after last chapter!