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Comments of chapter undefined of Hard to reincarnate into world of naruto as Iwa shinobi

Lord_Snow
Lord_SnowLv6Lord_Snow

Another kind of fanfic that keep killing his mother or family really what kind of fetish author have that they keep doing it.

Rorik_the_immortal
Rorik_the_immortalLv4Rorik_the_immortal

Cara vc ainda consegue rir com essa merda meus parabéns pela merda aleatória que vc calsou poderia muinto bem ter dito que sua mãe morreu após o parto pra que isso

dragon_guy:Hahaha, I killed off his family because I didn't want to write about parent-child relationship things. I also thought there would be alot of restrictions on what mc can do if there is a family setting. To be honest I never thought about mc having an alive family member. I guess I was a bit influenced by other fanfiction stories where mc is alone without family.
amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4amaturewriter

this chp is a waste of space, meaning the MC almost dieing and the system integration should've just been deleted and if author wanted to give MC tragic past, mom dieing whilst giving birth would've been enough instead of this BS

Trap_Mocha
Trap_MochaLv2Trap_Mocha

The system isn't even useless. It's too useful, it answers all his questions, and helps him all the time, it's basically his b`itch, smh. It'd be much better if he either didn't have a system or his system was a silent gamer one. (Ya know the type that wouldn't just answer all his questions and essentially be a godlike all knowing A.I. and suck his dick all the time) Not to mention how forced her entire death felt. She could've easily popped a soldier pill if she was low on chakra, and even if she couldn't do that she could easily run to the hokage tower (In under 10 minutes? Hah try seconds) or SHUNSHIN there and ask the hokage or some other random shinobi to do the kinjutsu for her. Such a simple solution to a simple problem. Also before you say "What if it's far" Jounin don't run at normal nigga speed, they can run hundreds of meters in a few seconds. (Just look at the f'uckin' anime if you want proof) And even then she could shunshin to get there even faster. For hells sake this entire chapter was forced as f'uck. The main character is also a naive beta male. He asked to go to the naruto world for a dumbass reason like "Oh it's my favorite show". That's gotta be the dumbest fucking thing I've ever heard. That's the kinda sentence that comes out of a 12 year olds mouth. For a grown man to spout such ignorant s'hit already makes me wish him misfortune. The main character somehow made friends with a bunch of people that think it's a good, funny prank to not tell people when it's time to go out to get dinner. Hilarious f'ucking prank, totally amazing. And instead of ordering food, making his own when he got home, or going to a corner store, he decided to run outside and wander around aimlessly until he finds a restaurant which he can order from... Do I even need to explain why that's dumb? Anyways, the guy finds a closing restaurant, yells at them to stop closing, because they'll totally listen and all return back to their stations just to serve one guy. He then proceeds to run across the f'ucking street without even checking if it's a red light, if there's any cars, or even if there's a f'ucking sign that has the hand on it that says "stop or walk". Is he on fucking cocaine? Not to mention how pissed off my guy got as a baby to just see a singular pair of tits. OF HIS OWN FUCKING MOTHER. Confirmed that the mc is a virgin who's never spoken to a woman in his entire fucking life. He got super excited because HIS mother was going to breast feed him as an infant. That's actually repulsive and disgusting. I can't imagine how that mother would feel if she knew this. She might have literally thrown him into a trash can if she knew it was just some disgusting, beta male cuck, who's died in a stupid fucking way, and got super excited at almost seeing her breasts. You think she'd still sacrifice herself if she knew this cuck basically possessed her baby? Hell the **** no! F'uck I even have a fight to pick with that "God". We don't even speak to children as equals why the f'uck would a god speak, to what's essentially equivalent to a f'ucking ant, as an equal? Why would he answer any of this character's moronic questions? Why'd he speak to humans at all? The idea that he personally goes to each and every person that dies and asks and grants them essentially anything they want is dumb as f'uck. Especially if what happens to them is decided by what "crimes" they committed or if they killed someone. I feel like everything would have went a lot smoother if he just dies and wakes up as a baby in Iwagakure. There's not even a point to this entire chapter. It's like the author wanted to give the MC some stupid f'ucking tragic past and instead just made himself seem idiotic. You could've easily started this story with the guy just waking up in Iwa as a baby, but instead pulled this incredibly stupid s'hit and made everyone here, me included look f'ucking mentally handicapped. Tysm.

NP_3228
NP_3228Lv5NP_3228

at least give him a perk for dying twice lol. Otherwise its a waste of a chapter.

AbyssVentus
AbyssVentusLv13AbyssVentus

This chapter served no purpose, you're just saying the MC is going to be weak to pain. Dude this is a Naruto Fan fiction he always going to be in pain.

RoboHar
RoboHarLv3RoboHar

To be honest this novel is trash support!

Overwrit
OverwritLv3Overwrit

The only thing I do not like, is the useless system, that if it were not for the Kinjutsu, gg.

Blackwater
BlackwaterLv11Blackwater

the Autor warned in the discription of the story that the first 2 ch are trash but yeah... didn't believe it to be this bad...

commander_pride_21
commander_pride_21Lv5commander_pride_21

Goodbye. I'm out. Killing his mother could've been done with his birth and you killed her just like Naruto family. It's just like having a Naruto story but from iwa with new characters and interact with cannon characters. I'm dropping it

mechanik_42
mechanik_42Lv4mechanik_42

Why didn’t he continue the system integration? Maybe he will get a quest for further integration? Sorry i don't speak english

CheeseDog
CheeseDogLv1CheeseDog

Time wasted, Useless chapter, Useless system, and I want my time back.

gonilua
goniluaLv4gonilua

This is such a stupid way to get a person reincarnated out if the many possible ways Just wow

Lord_Hallow
Lord_HallowLv13Lord_Hallow

.**** this system is so trash. It’s just making me more and more upset. All he got was a crappy companion who can’t do .shit for him. Might as well have just had him have a spirit living in his kind like the Necromancer from Soul Land. He wouldn’t been better off with an AI chip like Leylin Farlier and with the other functions versus and sentient AI who is useless.

DuncanIneau
DuncanIneauLv4DuncanIneau

This is bad

7sins_Lord
7sins_LordLv107sins_Lord

what?

8buddha
8buddhaLv48buddha

Argh...what a useless nurse, it was the nurse's fault that the tragedy happened.

WinterDragonGod
WinterDragonGodLv3WinterDragonGod

The system is Sakura, I M SURE OF IT!!!!

Kami12
Kami12Lv6Kami12

Thanks

Ell_LeFant
Ell_LeFantLv11Ell_LeFant

Thanks for the great chapter! 😄

Soupreme
SoupremeLv13Soupreme

wtf.. this is stupid, but, i wont judge it just yet, hopefully, it'll get better in the next chaps