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Comments of chapter undefined of Life Travelling Through Fiction

darkimortal
darkimortalLv6darkimortal

How does that quirk work with the body buffs the MC has? I mean does he even really have enough body fat to do anything? That's probably one of the worst quirks that someone with his build could have. You weren't really thinking when you chose that quirk did you? You should have gone with a regen quirk not a fat consuming quirk that would be a hindrance more than a benefit. I could logically see the MC kill himself because of this dumb quirk. ( Obviously that won't happen because of plot armor ) Also love how fake the MC is, going through puberty how many times and hasn't been attracted to anyone. Makes total sense * Insert Extreme Sarcasm Here * I mean really it's just sad. The most we've gotten so far is " friendship ". Is the MC a monk or maybe a Jedi? ( truthfully not much difference except the Jedi are super smug )

Quilidity
QuilidityAuthorQuilidity

Which previous jumps do you want more *** from? The first two when he's primarily surrounded by non-humans, The third where he's unconscious, or the fourth arc which shows about 4 months of his life as a 14 years old.

TheOnlyRaiko
TheOnlyRaikoLv10TheOnlyRaiko

I think it was pretty stupid to pick blind as a trait ngl

Scientistx
ScientistxLv6Scientistx

when a part of human senses or even a limb is disabled nervous system enchanches remanining part and limb control to previously untapped leves this happened multiple times in real earth mc's other sense's should be even stronger now also he should add echolochation to the train and conjoining that with his vapor sense should enchance his sense's even higher there is numerous occasion and records of people which lost their sight or born without sight developing echolochation as if it comes to them naturally a obvious sign of brain overcoming obstacles and re disrubiting unused sensory output and enchanching still active ones

Scientistx
ScientistxLv6Scientistx

he can get spirit water from spirit oasis in northern water tribe to heal his scar though not his vision he should ask Wan Shi Tong to teach and describe him water tribe water bending techniques by speech and movement he should also ask the location of Last Lion Turtle to Learn energy bending from the lion turtle he should also ask about all types of martial arts and wepon fighting techinques he should ask about knowledge about chakras,chi and techniques about them and chi blocking and ask to Wan if he knows the place of Guru pathik since mc should want to study under him he should unlock until all six of his chakras but never try to unlock though chakra since that means giving up love an since he never tried to initate the last one he will no block his remaning chakras the will stay open

AvidReader962
AvidReader962Lv14AvidReader962

Awesome

Kurumi21
Kurumi21Lv6Kurumi21

Thanks for the chapter ! 😁👍

Kaiser0000
Kaiser0000Lv6Kaiser0000

This was really a turn down for me, how dumb someone can be to select the creation quirk, know he'll be able to use it in the next world and not study how to use it. That's why i hate when you start giving inteligence boosts to the mc while the author can't write about an inteligent mc because this one is clearly not that bright.

Rex_Salamander
Rex_SalamanderLv5Rex_Salamander

Thanks for the chapter

LordRavenclaw
LordRavenclawLv13LordRavenclaw

Love it. Please continue

Apostle_of_cthulhu
Apostle_of_cthulhuLv4Apostle_of_cthulhu

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