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Comments of chapter undefined of One Piece: The eldest saiyan brother.

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Aklyf
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Wow I think we have a gem novel here...with only 3 chapters I am in for this novel ✌️

Aklyf
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is that an app can you paste the link ?

farendel_the_great:What is up with the grammar here If it's not your first language then i understand but you could use something like grammarly to help you
Unchainedx
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So the MC will accept all kinds of humiliation without doing anything? This is a very deplorable personality type to have.

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Hassan_Hadi
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That moment when there was only 3 chapters when you sleep only to wake up and find 62 😂

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RuthlessOni
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Grammar mistakes. Using plural and the wrong tense at times. Example: men is plural form of man, and when you add ‘s’ at the end for singular stuff and putting ‘ed’ or ‘d’ at the end of a word when their shouldnt be any at all.

Melshan
MelshanLv7Melshan

Another Fanfic where the MC becomes Luffy's nanny.

NineTailsOfTheVoid
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I thought the protagonist was edam but all I see is luffy luffy luffy and more luffy

Immortal_Lover
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hehe Author san I really love luffy being spoiled by him❤❤

Irishdamned
IrishdamnedLv14Irishdamned

I thank you for the chapter.

Eleesar_Talcontar
Eleesar_TalcontarLv1Eleesar_Talcontar

Thanks for the chapter!!

ALONZO
ALONZOLv3ALONZO

EXP

ahmed_waleed_1200
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Thanks for the chapter keep writing

anzafay21
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Thanks for the chapter! Keep up the amazing work vasto!!!

LUCIFER_20
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Thanks for the chapter...

Jailing
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Thank you for the chapter!