longer chapters please. also I like Noah I do but he needs to be a bit more assertive the harpy was a great step in making him a bit more dominant but he just gets dragged along for stuff. hopefully when he has an actual ranch he will be more assertive.
at this point, just say that the MC is not the MC and just a slave that just to nod and do eveything he is told. Even here, he barely spoke one time when this woman litteraly sold his life like nothing is wrong, but it got ignored totally. just switch the mc would be better
