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Comments of chapter undefined of D.E.M.O.N.S: Getting Summoned Weekly isn't so Bad

Reppyxz
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I think it would be interesting to see kat be summoned to a modern or futuristic world with cultivation energy And then have people plugged into simulations to cultivate and then have Kat use her dream walking ability to go into the simulation via the person plugged in. I probably have it centered around espionage or something along those lines having to infiltrate somebody’s mind to get information so a bit like inception I suppose. I just think a Kat Lilly spy mission would be fun

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I would love to see the MC actually make use of the abilities the Author seems to forget about. I don't understand why Kat hasn't been able to become proficient with her fans yet for that heartfelt contract. I miss chapters like those.

Reppyxz
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The world building you do with the series is incredibly enjoyable and interesting to me. personally is one of the main draw of the series. to be more critical though I think the when how you do the explaining can be a bit tedious and too much at once. And I’m sure you’ve heard this a lot as a writer is to show not tell granted some things need to be told but it would be more fun to feel like these things have been discovered rather than told. Also I think would be interesting to be summoned to the same world, but not by the same summoner iE to be summoned for a different purpose maybe even a purpose that would would conflict with the previous summoner whether that is actually possible with how you set up how summoning works I don’t know.

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thanks for the chapter!