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Comments of chapter undefined of D.E.M.O.N.S: Getting Summoned Weekly isn't so Bad

freeknight840
freeknight840Lv14freeknight840

I like the direction your going so far! I really like book 4 I think you've done some good world building and it is nice that its a bit shorter then book 3. all and all I think your doing great! I'm honestly surprised this story is not higher rated then it is.

Netrial
NetrialLv15Netrial

This is twice she's been stabbed in the back by one of her contractors. She needs to fix this for later summons.

Alawvahr
AlawvahrLv14Alawvahr

Mmmh better than book 2 is hard to say. I might give it if that asshole dies, okay yeah i just outright hate her contractor this time. So good work cause i believe you wanted this! What i really want is for Kat being better prepared, i mean yes she thinks about her abilities but with the those intelligent girls on earth plus the system she should really be able to get better and with the amount of danger and injuries i think she should do it fast. Or even try to meet other demons to get a better understanding about her own race? If she can travel to them with the systems help.. Which we don't know i mean yeah for the error she could but if it is allowed without it well we will see. Overall i enjoy the story and i quite like Kat even with me complaining a bit here ;)

Life_Smoothie
Life_SmoothieLv14Life_Smoothie

I thought I would like this part since it's a cultivation world but there's no context for it or barely that it matters so it's annoying especially since like a Roomba she ran out of energy and was folded. It seems to be a reoccurring theme of running out of energy and not know what is going on from the mc's point of view as well as the audience on some levels.

shillbear
shillbearLv14shillbear

i bet she only had to rest like 1 or 2 minuts and would been better of doing that

TJ_Th3
TJ_Th3Lv15TJ_Th3

personally not really a fan of the cultivator stuff. too many people doing stories on it rn. and most of them badly. your take isn't half bad im just thoroughly over the whole genre. good writing though. get your spell-check or an editor who's good with English and your all set to publish

untaken
untakenLv4untaken

Oh my gosh that was amazing and terrifying.