FictionOnlyReader
I've always noticed when I see a review is that they never tell the writer what they did wrong and how to correct them they just leave a bad review and that's it if you don't like what they're writing then don't leave a review unless you can give them an honest review that tells them what they did wrong.
I've been reading this so far and I've enjoyed it it's kind of disappointing that the writer completely discontinued it. I'm wondering why you stop? there were a lot of people who were getting into the fanfic I really do hope that you do come back to this and finish it because you should have the decency to finish what you started on.