MrLeeroy1998
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The only two problems I have with this story are that the author brings up the character sheet too many times when it's unnecessary, and in the second part, the MC isn't trying to get any stronger. He's had the same strength since the beginning. He doesn't try to do anything to get himself stronger in any way.
I like the story and I will continue to read it but I don't like how you're putting every bit of his stat points into luck each time he levels up you're wasting them by doing that you should be have him put it into either strength agility or index where it could be useful not always putting it into luck
Or you could criticize what the writer is doing wrong instead of saying it's a snoozefest like you did. The point of having a comment section is to be able to criticize what the person is doing wrong and to help them fix it, not to say something stupid like you did
"Please understand his past life. He used to work as a chef, and there were days when he couldn't even go home due to the long hours he spent cooking. Maybe he doesn't want to relive those days again. Cooking for long hours can be mentally and physically exhausting. If the writer of the story wants to make it that way, then that's how it should be. If you don't like the story, you can choose not to read it."
To the people here criticizing his work, if you don't like it, don't read it, and don't go in there criticizing somebody else's work just because you don't like it. I've been reading the comments, and there were so many people in the comments not giving any criticism on what they were doing wrong, just complaining about the way the story is and the way they didn't like it. The point of criticism is to help the writer understand what they're doing wrong, not just complain, complain, complain because they're not writing the story The Way You Want It!
Let me attempt to provide a more detailed rewrite of the text: Based on my understanding, you may have disliked a particular novel. As a result, you may have gone out of your way to create a brand new account with the sole intention of writing a negative review for the novel in question. It's important to note that this behavior is not considered constructive or mature. Negative reviews are not inherently wrong, but when they are written spitefully or vindictively, they can be harmful to the author and do not provide any helpful feedback. It may be more productive to express your thoughts and opinions constructively, such as by giving specific examples of what you did not like and why, so the author can use that feedback to improve their writing.
Understandably, you may feel unhappy about the direction of the Chinese novel. However, it's important to clarify that the mere fact that it's a Chinese novel doesn't automatically make it wrong or bad. It's essential to evaluate the novel based on its merit rather than making assumptions based on its cultural background. With this in mind, I encourage you to approach the novel with an open mind and a fair assessment of its qualities.
It appears that the individual in question is exhibiting a strategic approach by restraining himself from drawing the attention of the infamous dark wizard, Voldemort. It can be inferred that this is a prudent move to safeguard oneself from harm and remain vigilant amidst the grave circumstances at hand.