Comments of chapter undefined of Stuck as a Dungeon Mob
Stuck as a Dungeon Mob
Pwnzer
Chapter comments18
Great chapter! As you said everyone likes to see world building. The way you build the adventures world was really good, have us the sense of hierarchy and structure. I like how you also build the orc world and how they have customs and their behavior in tribes. It’s been nice to see how Ed is also changing some of the customs and we can see the changes. I am glad you continue to post the chapters. Please keep going!
This author should spend more time thinking about how to actually create a plot instead of forcing it into the shape he wants. Super cringe. Although I expect nothing less from a Chinese slave who willingly sells himself into an oppressive contract. Half the world is below average intelligence so you cant expect everyone to have a brain.
