Nice story ^-^ thank you for the chapters,
It feels like you're using past and present wording at the same time. It gives it a weird feeling. I hope this helps you ^-^ and if you feel that I give bad feedback do tell me ^-^
Why even give William a name? A name signifies that someone important to the story is there. The Will guy was just a fucking 2 chapter mob. Not only that but a chapter was dedicated to him. I can see a future filled with shitty fillers now.