Comments of chapter undefined of New Age Of Summoners

This novels idea is great. It just need more depth. The story feels forced and too easy. And no character development... they are too shallow

Even 4 year olds know stranger danger. Here we've what's ostensibly a 14 year old teenager, who just survived a mini genocide, lost his only family and is just nodding along to whatever a guy he met yesterday says. Not only is he missing a few screws, but also several bolts, nuts and even a few sheets altogether

I find it hard to believe that not once has ajax taken even one moment to consider the safety of his friends well being. The depth of our mc is lacking.

their interactions & dialogues was weird

good story, but the character sway to naive to say he and his friends almost got killed

😀👍👍Thanks for the Work

Good story...…...thanks for the chapter.....

excellent storyline thanks

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Thanks for the chapter.

thanks

He should have pretend that he didn’t

Thanks for chapter please contiue writing

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