vinayraj
What ungrateful brat like he just forgot that he was dead, if not for system which gave him an chance at survival, now he angry at system as if system owns him money. While some commenting that he is systems slave, he was originally dead which already kind to give an chance at life. And it is only logical that someone would invest in you if show your potential and in an world where human lives are like grass people rather be slave than an corpse. If have so much pride and ego then first you should have strength to back it up rather than relying on system to save your sorry ass. If you don't want to be system's slave then be better stop complaining about life being unfair rather make own decisions and profit from then system will just become an axillary help for you
Sorry but i Will wirght in portuguĂȘs. Eu n tĂŽ consegui ficar muito emocionado lendo a histĂłria parece que estĂĄ faltando um " clima " e eu n consigo simpatizar ou me importar com a situação ou situaçÔes creio que seja pela falta de detalhes em partes chaves dos capĂtulos entĂŁo minha dica Ă© tente dar mais importĂąncia a esse pontos q vocĂȘ considera importantes e coloque mais detalhes. Mesmo q eu esteja vĂĄrios meses atrasado nesse comentĂĄrio ele pode ser Ăștil para os capĂtulos atuais embora ainda n tenha chegado neles