vinayraj
Wow....14 with no combat experience can dodge and hold an expert assassin or whatever but the adults that train the children can't do that......beside spelling mistakes they are even dumb plot...is was more believe to have run into a monster or just jump the cliff than fighting and dodging someone faster than you...
btw.. scrap the cultivation Part.. its lame.. just leave the summoning Part.. isnt it Just accumilating Mana and then summoning... i bet in the future its all about the summoned creatures gaining exp and shit.. author u played to mutch summoners war and other summoning , Pokemon styled Games... scap the 1000jin aswell.. the world setting is to shallow for stuff like that... every realistic author wouldnt do it without a thourough thought setting. or making everyone buff as hell.. Training Till the age of 15 to summon a Pokemon.. >.> and thats why everyone needs 1k strenght to Join the Military.. but the summoning Part is a Secret.. how many ressources did mc burn to feel the Elements. No fking way a soldier is gonna get a 1/100 in his whole life.
that Report Part was so unneeded... >.> whole Story Till now : MC Intro. skip skip cuz boring Story + writing Style. MC growing Up skip skip cuz boring +... MC introduction to Elements and summoning skip skip MC tragedy + wasted time on a Report.. Till now there has been only a sorta devent world setting, and a sorta decent MC. on a vague lvl. a game die example using this might still be decent If the Department creating the Combat Part are skilled... otherwise... there is sadly zero worthwhile content till now. in case u haven't read any books... this might be acceptable...