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TheJester_6460

TheJester_6460

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2020-02-07 JoinedUnited States
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  • TheJester_6460
    TheJester_64601yr
    Replied to Dreslief

    Because its a light novel, donr expect realism. The excuse of “if he can think it why wouldnt he be able to do it” is extremely stupid, I can think of hitting a sniper shot across the world but i wont be able to do it. It seems another excuse is his reaction time? Why would that help him move faster?

    AGI: 4
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    Samsara Online
    Video Games · XIETIAN
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  • TheJester_6460
    TheJester_64601yr
    Commented

    Pls dont go no romance grandpa author.

    As a high-class cafe, Mickey Cafe had specialized boxes that its competitors did not have. Each box had its respective theme. Chen Chen had already made a reservation for the wonder house themed box several hours ahead.
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    I Have A Super USB Drive
    Sci-fi · Darkness Black Bear
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  • TheJester_6460
    TheJester_64601yr
    Commented

    Daddys money and daddys love. whats the difference?

    Just when Chen Chen thought she was going to change her mind, Xia Yin suddenly exhaled with a righteous, generous expression. "Looks like I can't hold on to this year's New Year's money…"
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  • TheJester_6460
    TheJester_64601yr
    Replied to BattyGoody

    Hell yeah

    Faced with his gaze, the girl instinctively avoided his eyes.
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  • TheJester_6460
    TheJester_64601yr
    Replied to CalamityStar

    Preach

    "Hello, I see that you're reading a biochemistry book. Can you spare me a moment to answer a question…"
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    I Have A Super USB Drive
    Sci-fi · Darkness Black Bear
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  • TheJester_6460
    TheJester_64601yr
    Commented

    Haha i learned the answer in preschool. the answer is “the horses name was friday”

    Another one: "Use chemotherapy to destroy the senescent stem cells in the bone marrow of an elderly subject, then employ the 'homing function' to inject autologous hematopoietic stem cells and mesenchymal stem cells, cultivated in vitro, to rebuild the immune system. Can the organs of the elderly subject be rejuvenated?"
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  • TheJester_6460
    TheJester_64601yr
    Commented

    I thought no living beings?

    "They could be placed into the USB drive – doesn't that mean that the ghosts in those horror movies could exist in this world?"
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  • TheJester_6460
    TheJester_64601yr
    Commented

    Hes gonna turn into a pile of ashes kid

    "Mum, Mum, what happened to Dad? When will he come out from behind those doors?"
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    I Have A Super USB Drive
    Sci-fi · Darkness Black Bear
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  • TheJester_6460
    TheJester_64601yr
    Posted

    This novel is amazing, it has made me laugh many times and I had binge read it in just 2 hours. The only thing that I didnt like about the novel are the large amounts of teases, for a system practically based on *** you would think with all the chances he had he would have had *** already, however he really only does oral and then some dumb reason makes him unable to have ***. I rate this novel 9/10, a rating very high because most novels on this app are a 2/10. I guess in an app where the main page is filled with people who can barely speak english its pretty good but eh

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    My Pick Up Artist System
    Magical Realism · SamsaraWithWords
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  • TheJester_6460
    TheJester_64601yr
    Commented

    The author has an amazing way with words. I respect you

    Ben explained with urgency. "All the drunk women are flooding out! What better time to run openers than now? Aren't they going home? Let's convince them to bring home a stray!"
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    My Pick Up Artist System
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  • TheJester_6460
    TheJester_64601yr
    Commented

    I have been enlightened

    Ben's eyes widened in understanding. 'I guess it makes sense that commenting on their tits wouldn't be the best opening line.'
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    Magical Realism · SamsaraWithWords
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  • TheJester_6460
    TheJester_64601yr
    Replied to Hihi_No4

    Im rewriting the chapters currently. it would be reccomended to only read the chapters with a title and not REWRITING. Sorry.

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    Football Prodigy’s Second Chance
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  • TheJester_6460
    TheJester_64601yr
    Commented

    Why cant he read the words he literally just thought

    Seville was immediately taken aback by Johnny's behaviour. He knew if he told the others, he'd have been done for but he didn't have a choice, if he lied Nathaniel would immediately knew about it because of his mind reading powers. He could try to block him from his mind but then he'll be tagged as a conspirator, which he was.
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  • TheJester_6460
    TheJester_64601yr
    Replied to ButterySpread

    At first i was writing novels for fun, which was why the chapters are very poorly written. I found making novels was very fun and im currently working on rewriting them. Sorry!

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    Football Prodigy’s Second Chance
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  • TheJester_6460
    TheJester_64601yr
    Replied to ButterySpread

    Sorry, Im going to rewrite the first chapters and im currently working on that. I was at first making novels to pass the time, but i found that making novels was actually very fun. Sorry!

    Ch 2 Reborn (2)
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  • TheJester_6460
    TheJester_64602yr
    Replied to KnightShade420

    His parents flight got delayed because the God of Plot made it so 😅😂

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  • TheJester_6460
    TheJester_64602yr
    Replied to BBN97

    Hmm your right I should have made more chapters to put in some extra details, but for the problem of money, didnt I say his parents died in his last life from the stress of paying his medical bills and depression of their star son turning paralyzed? I appreciate the constructive criticism, many have been telling me I rush the story and dont provide enough details, so ive been trying to work on that.

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  • TheJester_6460
    TheJester_64602yr
    Replied to lordkc

    Your right, when I reread I was gonna change it but I would need to change the other chapters too and im way too lazy to do that 😂 sorry!

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  • TheJester_6460
    TheJester_64602yr
    Replied to BBN97

    Any reason? Im trying to get better at writing

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  • TheJester_6460
    TheJester_64602yr
    Posted

    I enjoy making this novel, so I have put it on my main account. Sorry for any inconvenience! Wondowhsoehqidbownpsiowkdorjwosidjowjdbdowhspejpwbdlw Bruh

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    A Champions Second Chance
    Competitive Sports · Miraf_1196
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