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In my opinion : If you add 10 years to all the ages it wouldn't break the suspension of believe in every paragraph. But maybe this is my impression, and I would say a few chapters in and this may change
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Quite good, I hope the summoning story is a good one
Not bad
Couple of errors but all round good
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