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Comments of chapter undefined of Paragon of Sin

aphye
aphyeLv15aphye

This chapter is a good example of what we expect filler to be. so much inuendos and small bits of hidden information were transmitted in this seemingly simple and shallow conversation where almost nothing of actual progression in the overarching plot moved, it was still good. no useless, re-phrasing, hunks of symantics to needlessly increase the word count to meet requirements. Thanks for the chapter, In hope you don't get offended by any criticism I give or others give, and just realize we are deeply invested into your novel and we can separate your good writing and your bad writing due to how deeply we are invested. Good work!

HeavenlySo
HeavenlySoLv15HeavenlySo

The mystery deepens

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KevinAscending

KevinAscending
LMAOBOI
LMAOBOILv14LMAOBOI

Boop

Maian
MaianLv15Maian

So many questions.

HeavenlySo
HeavenlySoLv15HeavenlySo

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

KingConner
KingConnerLv15KingConner

Thanks