Comments of chapter undefined of Mortal Kombat System in BNHA

"Don't touch my woman" That's cringy dude. seriously

The thing I hate in this chapter is how he gets angry at a 3 year old they are 3 they don't know anything they just started school so why the fu.ck is he so angry and acting like they tried to sexualy harass mina and why does he say she is his women he is 3 years old and so is mina

The random polish was a very nice touch it made me cringe pretty hard good job. keep it up.

I'm not even finished with the chapter but I've lost count with how many grammar mistakes and wrong sentences I've found... Correct these mistakes mate, it's terrible, for real

so cringy

Jesus i thought this was going to be good but all i can think is how cringet this is. There like 3yrs old and he says dont touch my woman fucking hell this makes me want to gauge out my eyes

This is some of the most cringe **** I have read in a while...

thanks for the chap but there area few words mina says that aren't translated into English I don't know if u wanted it to be sobbing gibberish or a typo

Creepy ass **** Writer should seriously consider to mental hospital. Or at least a serious self check on where hes going in life.

This chapter was so cringeworthy... I needed help from god to get through it. Smh

The grammar is so bad I couldn't understand what is going on at all. It literally painful to read

It’s not weirdness. It’s quirk

I don't know if you know but in New mortal kombat movie scorpions revenge scorpion also has a minor teleportation

Thank you for the chapter ☺

The author read the first chapters. There are a lot of blunders. Straight from the very beginning that I could not stand. 1) What nafig breasts at 3 years old ?! 2) What kind of perverted tendencies to paw the breast at 3-4 years old? Self-awareness is just being born in them. How do they know about boobs (or rather, they know but shouldn't think about it). Have you seen or heard about 4 year old perverts anywhere ?! Fuck you have a fantasy that's just ****ed up. 4) "she is my woman" she should not know the meaning of this phrase. Even if she knew it would be bad. At this age, the concept of love for them is abstract as: sour or sweet candy. 5) what nafig is she shy about ?! This feeling appears at about 5 years old when a child enters and stays in society! Before that, they are extremely active and have no morals. 6) a child who would have been beaten long ago would have been killed (Against the background of ongoing actions and dialogues, he is beaten for at least 3 5 minutes during this time. Moreover, with a fiery fist, he should have 3rd and 4th degree burns if this is an ordinary flame and he has hellish) ... (Stretched actions and dialogues, poorly described background) 7) he didn't even start using the system what crazy performance at 3 years old. (So ​​it is written that he did not use it). 8) he has a dofig inta but he is dumb as a cork. 9) sfigali his mother's quirk stronger than rei todoroki, the prospector carefully chose her, if she was stronger then she would not be his mother. (If you do fanfiction then study the lore of this world carefully) 10) how does he know that her mother's quirk is stronger than rei todoroki? Is it because she even works for herself? (What nonsense). 11) if his father and mother are so strong that they forgot in this village hole (that they are unknown). The details need to be worked out carefully. Do you check before release? Don't you think about its consistency? These are only the initial chapters, it hurts to think what will happen next. (Google translate)

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I hope this was just one bad chapter and the rest of them aren’t like this

to much of him talking in third person and about himself... i was just confused for the most of thechapters

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