Comments of chapter undefined of Devil's Rise

The writing quality on the fight scenes seems stiff and not engaging, for me at least. Instead of <Punch> <Dodge> Try this. He braced his stance, and hurled a punch, but it was easily dodged with his opponent's sly movements.

You're off to a good start author. Keep up the good work 🤙

The MC is a bit of a prick.

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