Comments of chapter undefined of The Demon’s Bride

The Demon’s Bride

mata0eve

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Lovelyn_EzeokaforLv3Lovelyn_Ezeokafor

Kudos to you Mr writer for this sensual novel. I love it, though there are few mistakes,it still scale 100per cent for me. please, more updates, thanks

3yr

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tristarrshowdogsLv14tristarrshowdogs

Master Ian, I love how you insult people with such kind words lol.

3yr

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wilhelminaroseLv14wilhelminarose

I love how the story is going successfully

3yr

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Arowen_1111Lv15Arowen_1111

There are sone grammatical errors, but not so many that they effect the flow. Your story is good! I’m liking it a lot so far! 😃👍🏻

3yr

wolf_lover2000Lv11wolf_lover2000

So Glad ypu had ian speak up about his feelings of love for Elise!!!

3yr

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sakurahime147Lv14sakurahime147

🤣🤣 Ian doesn't want his puppy to be upset

3yr

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0ctober_RoseLv140ctober_Rose

Hun. As far as typos go. Plz don't worry. For your writing is awesome and we all know about spell check. Thank You for all your hard work.

2yr

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AngylolaLv1Angylola

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

3yr

Yan_erLv4Yan_er

Ian is having fun with the guests😉😉😁

3yr

Maeve_Kelly_0107Lv13Maeve_Kelly_0107

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

2yr

Barbie_Sparkles_6551Lv1Barbie_Sparkles_6551

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

2yr

LlamaButtonsLv2LlamaButtons

Ian, you beast! 🤣

2yr

Frances_LennixLv15Frances_Lennix

The grammatical and typographical errors make it very difficult to read the story. this is throughout and not just this chapter. Have you tried using a grammar/spell checker before uploading? It would help.

2yr