Comments of chapter undefined of The Demon’s Bride

It's a bit hard to follow along partly because of the grammar. I want to know more but at the same time I dont because of the difficulty to understand what's going on. Maybe a few more chapters to decide..

I really like this story it's interesting trying to figure out what you're saying Please edit soon.

oh hes old... 🍵🍵 🍵 interesting indeed

Thanks for your hard work

The story line is interesting, but the sentences seem a bit long and poor grammar makes it difficult at times to follow.

interesting plot so far i am enjoying it.

I had wondered why he chosevto buy Elise. it does make sense. i wonder what else he knows anout Elise.

I'm really liking the plot <3 ... so far, so good... I hope to read the edited version someday :)

great story. keeps my interest. I will keep reading. great job!

Is an interesting history different start, make you read more...

I’m liking this book so far.

Love the story so far however it really needs to be properly edited. There are many errors making it a little difficult to read at times

Hi dear author, I'm loving the plot so far. It's good. But it is really hard to understand due to terrible grammar. Please if possible, review and edit the grammatical errors. As far as chapters are free I don't mind, but for further locked chapters, I doubt anyone wants to spend money , when there's so much grammatical mistakes.

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I am enjoying this book so far still mot sure why the young girl was bought from being a slaves. Ian i think he maybe demon or devil?? only time will tell.

Caught my Attention so far

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Loving this so far❤

Muy buena