Love the story so far however it really needs to be properly edited. There are many errors making it a little difficult to read at times

Really slow burn . Really enjoying that. As for editing, caught a couple errors in the last 2 chapters so you may want to have someone check on that

I'm loving the story so far. Questions, who and what's the deal with Mr. Quinn plus the seemingly safe guy. Definitely a mystery here

Great story development . Can't wait for the climax.