Comments of chapter undefined of The Demon’s Bride

Please clean up the grammar and tense..... its making it Hard to read and ruins the flow.

English editing for appropriate word usage, tense, grammar PLEASE . it is like a channel flIckering during a really good show. It is a very good story.

Hmm wonder what kind if demon Ian is 🤔🤔 He’s buying a pet name Elise ☺️☺️

This is rather difficult to read with the amount of grammatical errors. The story could be good if it were properly proofread and edited. In the state that it currently is in, it's a linguistic nightmare that literally gave me a migraine.

Lan! Looking forward to having a good time with you 😁

I'm interested in where this is going, the plot has me hooked. However you need to clean up the grammatical, syntax, tense, ect errors. It's doing your story a great disservice

He makes human sacrifices to attain more power.😳 This is the ML? 😬

It coulda good but the grammar and phrasing it’s hard to swallow

I'm getting excited ☺️

See this! I just gifted the story: Massage chair

interesting

😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘🙂🙂🙂🙂

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So far so good [img=recommend]

im wondering what is Ian actually? is he a sorcerer or what? and the priest? is he in some kind of faction?

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Like the story

❤️❤️❤️

I kinda like this story i just read it today... And the story looks very nice... And I really love it...