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Mary_Lewis_9753

Mary_Lewis_9753

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2021-12-22 JoinedGlobal
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    Mary_Lewis_97532yr
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    I'm finding this story, like many others on here, riddled with grammatical and punctuation issues. these issues do cause a story to be difficult to read and follow. Are there no editors that read them prior to posting?

    Ch 6 Chapter 2
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    Invincible Colorless Butler
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  • Mary_Lewis_9753
    Mary_Lewis_97532yr
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    This is rather difficult to read with the amount of grammatical errors. The story could be good if it were properly proofread and edited. In the state that it currently is in, it's a linguistic nightmare that literally gave me a migraine.

    Ch 4 The Masked Man In The Slave Street, Buying a Slave-I
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    The Demon’s Bride
    Fantasy · mata0eve
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