Comments of chapter undefined of Physics The Greatest Magic
Physics The Greatest Magic
Renovator
Chapter comments28
This book is poorly written at best. Using generic writing tropes, insane character writing, forced robbery bs, nonexistent character developement, i can take that he is skilled at magic- but now he has to go for melee out of nowhere while his magic works (who would have done that? - if you put yourself in the role- you live in the normal world and can pick up daggers whenever you want and now you transmigrate or whatever to a magic world you wouldn't pick up weapons when you have a fucking MAGIC at hand! Also the shameless 11 yrs old girl, wtf?! Why not make her at least 15 man- have some decency. I mean the idea is great and all, the magic is good but you really force it with the story. It doesn't have a flow and feels like you're rushing it. I mean no hate just constructive criticism.. hope you get better with the writing. ALL HAIL "FLAURA" xD
Renovator:I hope i get better too, you should check out my other book, that was started recently. Or the recent chapters on this one :)
