Renovator
Is it just me or the chapter is too short?
it totally is
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Gatekeeper: He knows I’ve magic! King: BRING ME THE CHILD
Just started this story and I think it's worth reading! Gambatte!
I should start writing a novel on this site XD ya can make a good story with 3 paragraphs
The shortest chapter I have ever read !
Theres a lot of "room" for improvement on this chapter, if you know what I mean.
chapter comment exp done
I appreciate other perspectives
drop if he becomes the kings pet. I prefer free op mcs
i felt so cheated with this short chapter. damn author. so much suspense
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when the novel change from one perspective to another for 1 plot, it became boring as hell.
It doesn't matter who's perspective it is the chapter can't really be called a chapter if it's this short. Come on we are getting interested don't give us a reason to back out now
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Thanks
Ch1>ch2>ch3>ch4>ch5>ch6? Why are they getting so short?
This short! Why can't this included in previous or next chapter as separate section.
what is this? this is a quarter of chapter
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon