Comments of chapter undefined of Physics The Greatest Magic
Physics The Greatest Magic
Renovator
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And the magic bones was right.. .. ...bad world Dev ...bad character dev .They all r terrible . Dropping
Clean analysis, And yes, I found out I didn't like the story exactly at chapter 3 But I'm trying to be a critic so I read on, "maybe it's just a whack beginning?", I'd thought I was expecting the special ability (magic bones) stuff and i really have just a tiny amount of problem with it, The magic bones doesn't spoil the story in any way and my comment here was an affirmation of me and a fellow daoist claims HOWEVER, i really do not like the storyline, “Who transmigrates and decides to pick up ladies without any valid reason on the first day”, I don't remember the story a lot but this part made an impression btw, some stories have nice world dev by chapter 5 Go read "CHRYSALIS" or "LORD OF THE MYSTERIES"
Darkfrair:either you read further into the story and for some reason chose chapter 5 to post the comment instead of chapter 1-4 (unlikely), it took you 5 chapters to discover that you dislike the writing style (possible, but usually people can tell in 3), or you somehow can tell the world dev and char dev are bad, despite it only being 5 chapters, and thus barely any time to truly develop anything. (very shortsighted). Or you dislike how he had the mc put in peril. (probable)
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This clearly shows the mentality of a person from a first world country, where people are decent enough that they don't ignore a distressed child in need. I feel most people in his situation would also offer a hand. On the other hand him later proceeding to drag her along into an area that he was just told was dangerous, kinda defeats the purpose of helping her in the first place. Out of the frypan into the fire?
Oh man I just can’t with this. Made it to chapter 5, expecting it to get at least somewhat decent but man it just goes on and on with these tropes and cliches and this idiotic mc lucking out on plot armor. It’s not a good sign when the reader gets more enjoyment out of reading the comments to paragraphs instead of reading the actual story. I’ll drop this before I have a stroke. Someone who actually read the later chapters, please tell me; does it get better? If so, when?
